What’s working…

Jack’s having more fun away from callers!

Jack is now getting to his main point more quickly.

What needs some attention…

The opinion should come even more quickly.

The more humorous style in the examples below show be more consistent.  It sounds good!

Audio Examples…

Raven Simone doesn’t want to be black or gay.  Good simple humor from Jack…

Jack Riccardi 02 Raven Simone

 

More Raven.  Getting to point quicker.  Maybe a tweet, Jack’s point, more tweets…

Jack Riccardi 03 More Simone