Tobin Newscast from July 6:


-The individual stories are sounding better, as the pauses within the stories are much shorter than before.
-The between-story pauses are still too long and sometimes hard to understand.  For instance twice it sounds like he turns the mic off between stories.
-I recommend that to get him used to doing a newscast with stories that all fit together, someone should write out news on a single page for him, and then have him practice.   If he can get the pauses between stories as short as the pauses within stories, I’ll think we’ll be at a different level.
Sample Newscast (based on the stories above) to practice…