Newscast, Shane’s style, banter with Tim…
-Shane’s style is fantastic! Conversational, in control but engaging all the time
-The writing has not caught up yet. So you can hear clunky, old writing mixed with Shane’s better flow.
-Good interaction between Shane and Tim
Some Writing tips to help the writing catch up to Shane’s style…
-Lead with the impact, not the process.
-Use “you” and “your” as often as possible! This forces a direct connection between the story and the listener.
-Keep the first sentence really short. 8 words max, or so.
-Avoid: suspect, apprehend, arraign, legislate, vehicle etc…