LIZ

LIZ NEWS 1

Great storytelling, emotion

The city council/state story, kind of wonky

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LIZ NEWS 2

Once again, great story “starts”.

Political story again, Keystone, wonky

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DON

DON NEWS 1

Gun crackdown even more colloquial?  By the numbers?

The bus intro!

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DON NEWS 2

Very political and not at all local

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BILL

BILL NEWS 1

Local politics and sound

Speaker phone sound on bus story

Good writing/reading on the cough sneeze story

The OTC story, a little over the top and the cut might be the lead

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BILL NEWS 2

Good story selection

Better delivery, slow down between stories a little more