KTSA News Follow October 9, 2014


Don Morgan

Significantly improved writing and delivery!  Still some process writing, but this is nice…



Elizabeth Ruiz

Less crime and terrible than previously, but still too much jargon in the writing



Bill O’Neil

Noon news.  Kind of monotone and a little too fast.  Better energy and writing, but the sound and delivery still need some work…


Great use of sound


Johnny Shannon

This is a great feature.  It has a hidden soundbite (“ice cream is for idiots”) that could have had bigger presence, but Johnny sounds good on this kind of story…


This story about the rain is more standard.  It has phone tape that he really doesn’t need.  I’d rather hear him tell the story himself…