What’s working…

Great humor throughout the hour from BOTH Rox and Davis.  The humor is sounding better and better and makes the show more and more listenable.

Rapid Fire improves.  There is less reading and more telling.  Still more work necessary (example 1 below)

The hour start is good with a good mention of important weather.  It’s kind of an awkward transition into the first topic (example 2 below)

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What needs some attention…

The guest is still introduced as a guest.  This should be by topic, with the guest there to help fill out the topic.  With this guest and topic, for instance: “What is a Jank?  Turns out its a winning BBQ sauce.  But it’s gotta be more than that.  Sergio Sanchez, your BBQ sauce just won a cool award but what’s a Jank?”  (example 2 below)

The interview sounds like an interview and not like a conversation.   (Example 3 below).

Davis and Roxanne still bounce around from topic to topic a lot.  Now that their chemistry is better, her presence is stronger, and their story selection is better, they should focus on focusing on one topic at a time.

Audio Examples…

Rapid Fire.  Better, but still too much reading…

KURV 04 rapid fire still read better

Quick lead in, but then meandering into the segment and guest intro…

KURV 01 meander lead and gust intro

 

Interview with Jank Guy.  This has to be fast paced conversation and not question/long answer interview…

KURV 02 answer too long

Here is a quick example from later in the interview that is closer to what the whole thing, and every interview should sound like…

KURV 03 convo