KURV Morning News September 2014
Good energy/pacing out of the Fox Network news
Sergio doing an excellent job with questions in the Q&A keeping it compelling.
What needs some attention
Tim’s slow deliberate read still slows the show too much
His writing also remains non-conversational (i.e “The FBI has taken over the investigation into the weekend incident in far South Brownsville where a Border Patrol agent opened fire on a militiaman.” (Second story in the second audio below)
Sergio seems a little unsteady at the beginning of the last story in Cut 2 on the Home Depot breach story
Tim was going to try to pick up the pace in his delivery but maybe we should work instead in the writing, to make it more conversational and more FM ready
Sergio should always lead Into a newscast and so the first story. This will also help keep the pace of the show faster.
We still need more sound to make these newscasts more engaging.
Solid open that flows well…
Second group of stories that start to slow down…