KXL Afternoon News September 12, 2014

 

What’s Working…

Nice story selection

Great conversational writing!  The writing is back on track compared to a few weeks ago.  Especially the first story, example below.

Great sound overall.

What needs some attention…

The Rebecca piece is pretty sparse for it’s length.  Maybe some news or Tv sound from when the crime happened to fill out the story a little bit?  It starts strong and the guest is good.  It’s just either too long or too dry

Now that Val and Joe are really settling in, I’d love to hear more frequent crosstalk. Not longer and not chatty, just more often so that an average listener hears them as people more often.

Val still needs to smile more as she reads.  She has actually slipped a little back into KOMO mode.

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Audio Examples…

The Rebecca piece…

KXL PM 02 Rebecca Marshall Feature

 

First newscast.  Great selection and writing…

KXL PM 01 Open 5pm Tues Sept 2nd