-Get closer to the mic and smile More. These will make you more intimate
-Good use of sound and how its woven into the copy.
-One thought per sentence, keep sentences really short
-great adding the sound!
-Smile, tell us more than read it. Pre read out loud a couple of times so that you can go through it easily and more casually.
-Keep the sentences short
-End on down notes
-Pauses between sentences. Keep sentences tight to help it sound like you are reading less.