Andre Sound and Tone…
Great energy and sound. But kind of DJ. Voice too high.
Bring the voice down, to get a little more authority. Just a little.
You need another piece here. This is just two people talking between themselves
Interaction? A caller?
Sound? Ronaldo fun sound from Youtube? Tina music?
Not exactly fun or funny. A little feel good.
Hear the difference. Fun, funny friends, even the artist is “one of the team”
In Prep, make sure every segment has these elements, or build them in, or don’t do that segment.