What’s Working…

The segments are getting shorter and tighter and that sounds better!  It actually sounds like they move faster.

Renato out sounds good ( I want some Santini ice cream next time I am in Chiado…)

The dare segment sounds good and definitely fun but a little too complicated (more below)

What needs more attention…

Renato out.  The intro segment where he talks about the line, etc. is a great length.  The segment where he inside talking to the lady is a little long. It should be 3 minutes or maybe 3.30 if it’s really good.  He goes almost 5.

Question For Cheese.  I think the multiple choice questions makes the benchmark much longer than it should be (and in the example I heard, the player asked for two questions to be repeated!).  Would it work to just ask a question “what is Homer Simpson’s wife’s name?” and if they get it right or wrong, give the point accordingly?  That would make the game faster, simpler, easier to follow and understand but the objective and the consequence would still be entertaining.

 

Audio Examples…

Cheese…

RR_MoShow_08-09h TALK 05 PERGUNTA PARA QUEIJO_1st Part

 

Renato makes DGH want ice cream…

RR_MoShow_08-09h TALK 09 RENATO outside I

 

Renato talking too long.  I worry that it gets boring…

RR_MoShow_08-09h TALK 10 RENATO outside II