Newscast with lots of starts, stops, opportunities to listen to anything but RR…
So many start stops
News with basically three very long stories. Normal? Worth talking to Raquel about?
Mention of the song and artist before Miriam is too long. Keep it short and tight.
Always move forward!
Miriam setup is a little long. So by the time she gets to the kids, we are too long into the piece.
Example of Two Things: news mention and how fast a quick mention (like the song mention above) should go…