VIBRATION – 18 September 2014

 

What’s Working…

Sexo is simpler and makes more sense.  And it is not going too long.

Horror is almost perfect, very well done before and after the flash

Marco, Albane, Paul’s speed, tone, and voices are where they should be.  The show moves fast but not too fast and everyone sounds friendly.

What needs some attention…

Paul’s segment is more conversational but sometimes everybody talks at once.  You can’t do that, it’s too confusing (example below)

I’d like to hear a little more ‘fun’ in Sexo.  More smiling, a laugh, like everyone’s having a great time.  It still sounds like everyone is just racing through it.

I would like to hear a little more from Albane generally.  I hear her participate in Horror of course and Sexo and with the comments, but I would like to hear more interaction between her and Marco, like they’re both having fun together doing the show.  It still sounds like he has his part and she has hers, etc.

Audio Examples…

Sexo…

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Horror…

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Paul…

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