Really great progress. Starting to sound like a team, and friends
Everybody’ now has great presence, and in the right way
Now to really focus on roles, preparation, and content.
The flash needs more energy, presence. Shorter stories?
Bon Plan (CityGo)
Nadia sounds a little lost
Sounds like no one did homework. This should sound like you’ve really studied it and that’s why you’re recommending it.
Just one story per segment. Alexis always has to be the good guy. (roles)
Nadia should fight to not give up the story…more drama, more tension. Make us really want to hear it.
You sound like just friends here, which is great.
Start with the fourth of third thing, then explain what it is, and then work your way to the first thing. “and the number one thing…”
Out of the news
Why so long? Commercials?
Get RIGHT to the point. Armelle and her problem should be in the first ten seconds after the flash if you’re going to make a segment.
Out of the news…