What’s working…
More informative and easier to follow now.

Excellent opinions from Michael, good support from Roger

As always, great production elements but they make more sense now.  Easier to follow.

What needs some attention…
Michael should get to his opinion faster, with a tighter setup.

Roger doing story set up sounds great, but want to make sure Michael sets up at least two main topics

Reading.  Big story should be TOLD not read.  Also example below from FB lady


Silences (mouth noises)