What’s Working…

GREAT Bon Plan!  Fast and simple, clear, and really informative (first example below)

Ludo’s tone and style are very good and stand out.

 

What Needs More Attention…

Berenice is still reading too much, and too monotone and fast.  Note the difference in her content and Ludo’s in the second segment below.  Berenice needs to slow down, read less, smile more, and play a little more in her segments.  (Second example below)

The segments should be more interactive.  In the Berenice segment about Doctisimo Berenice goes a full minute without any real participation from Ludo.  The first Bon Plan example below or VIBRATION could be used as an example of how to do this better. (Second example below)

While Ludo’s tone is great, I worry that if he goes any further he is going to tart sounding arrogant.

 

Audio Examples…

Good bon plan.  Fast, short, informative, interactive.

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Doctisimo segment.  Focus on Berenice style vs Ludo’s…

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